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Rain on Roof

More Hooyah.

The Only One Who Knows - Cat Grant, L.A. Witt

Felt like this one was missing some Hooyah. It almost seemed too nice and sweet, not fleshed out enough and a lot went on in a short amount of time. It was definitely not as hardened and dark as a lot of other military fic I've read. Which for me doesn't work. I prefer my military blokes, especially special forces, at little more Vadim and Dan.