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Rain on Roof

Strength of the Pack - Kendall McKenna Far too much tell and not enough show. As a reader it was a little annoying, I mean I understand inference and don't need it spelled out like I'm a bit dim. Also, while parts of the plot wee quite tight, the last two thirds of the book was all over the show and didn't flow. I think this had potential, but needed more work in the end.